Analysis of Early Haiku (4)
Raincoats and rubbers
Visages of the old days
Made me smile at me
How you feel each day
Controls your thought and body
Be aware of this
Going round and round
Helps a dog to find it's spot
Is not productive
Beautiful blue skies
Reflect around the whole earth
Please give them their due
Nature is our friend
Be kind to her treat her right
She'll be good to you
Scheme | XXA XAX XXX XXB XXB |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 1010 11011 11111 11111 0111010 10111 10101 1011111 11010 10011 0101011 11111 101101 1110101 11111 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 920 |
Words | 70 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 3, 3, 3, 3 |
Lines Amount | 15 |
Letters per line (avg) | 19 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 57 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 14 |
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Submitted on October 09, 2013
Modified on April 10, 2023
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