Analysis of dream 609



A hospital place,i stay
Two own choices now lay

One warm,soft,& kind to groom
The other to pass life in her womb

Now who's to say i wont loose
Same coin different sides now choose
Alike,reflection and opposites both of you

One giving light is her way
The other,emotional fire is her sway

Can i trust in light
To not blind my sight
To leave me in darkness if not her right

Acting on impulse the other is more my type
The choice of good and evil Is no more than hype
To self realization comes to mind

I dont want to split a beautiful butterfly
Im sick of this choices that fly by
For love and life seem to be my battle cry.


Scheme AA BB XXX AA CCC DDX EEE
Poetic Form
Metre 01011 111011 11111 010111001 1111111 11100111 10100111 1101101 0110101 11101 11111 1110101101 101100101111 011101011111 111010111 11111010010 111110111 11011111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 604
Words 129
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted on August 19, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Edward Gonzalez

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