Dream girl



The girl no one notices
The boy whos love he doesnt focus in
The pair unknown in Destiny their both novices
In these instances that play in my head
Her soul trappings in my mind when in bed
Feelings of peace & completion,the empty hunger now fed

Shes the grace in my fall
The one to give an order so tall
She has me following awake,asleep in all
Has she been changed,at what cost n to what cause
Has she had her innocence lost
Has her light begun to fade
Has she sold her will to what fate

The thought of isolation in chaos
Is it real for me to buy it at a kiosk

The simplicity of lifes organic tune
Its a song that ends to soon
A shinning light,quickly glows in the cosmic pool
A mix of lights,colors,messages out to reach
For a mind,an eye,us to learn from what they teach
To give hope to find what they seek.
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Submitted on August 17, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 791
Words 169
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 7, 2, 6

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