Analysis of Distance Between Lover Seem to be Forever (Poem No. 3)



Revised)
Before I lay down to sleep
I love to pray for you my Sweet.

When I close my eyes for awhile,
I see a glimpse of your smile.

Wherever you may go, whatever you may do;
I have miscall or not, I would have to deal with that.

When ever I'm feeling blue, or just lonely for you,
I must not complain..., or be suspicious on you.

Do me a favor be consistent and  persistent...
Let's have mutual respect, let's be true to self.

Honesty is the best policy in every relationship.
Without it the ship of companionship will go wreck.

Truth can set us  free and gain  respect.
Lie is lie, just like a flies, flutter by, like a butterfly.

When I'm awake or going to sleep,
I pray for you in my secret place.

Distance between lover seem to be forever,
But through prayers make us closer ever.

Originally written in March 2012
in rough draft I should not have submitted yet.
Now this is growing up baby poem,ehehhehe
Revised 12-2012


Scheme ABX CC DX DD XX XX XX BX EE XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 01 0111111 11111111 11111101 1101111 01011110111 111111111111 1101101111011 111011101011 1101010100010 111000111111 1001011000100010 011011010111 111110101 11111011011010 110111011 111101101 100110111010 111111010 010001001 01111110101 111101101 01
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 902
Words 175
Sentences 15
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 18
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Submitted by ging_a on October 02, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ging Alburo D.

Hi Everyone! This is Ging not so tall and not so short. I came from a big family of Ten and I am the last fruit of my parents love on the first set of seven siblings. My family describe me as friendly, lively, lovely and poetic and funny; this is when I was at home in my native land and speak my own language and dialect. I speak two languages, three dialects and two dialect that I can understand but I can't speak very well. another extras,I can read Spanish but can't understand all the words, I speak few sentence. I love most of the sports and I was involved in sports during my younger years. I have passion in music and acting during my High school and college years. Graduated From O.T.C In B.S.E.ED. I started my Master but did not continue it...Its to be continued...:)I love to sing and play instruments like: guitar, piano, Auto Harp,ukelele, banjo and trying an accordion. I love life, I love to smile and laugh. I love to imagine and to dreams. I like to keep busy not sitting and doing nothing. I love vegetarian food and fruits and water to drink. I love people and I am people person. Honesty is the best policy for me. I like to be around trust worthy, Spiritual and God fearing people.I believe in simplicity is beauty,Simple but terrible ...:) I am curious person...I dislike critical, hateful person. CRITICISM without love brings destruction and LOVE without criticism brings stagnation. You have to learn to balance it. I like poetry because its an expression of our inner soul. Words that sweetly and wisely spoken are precious than silver or gold. I was told by the people when I was little, I am poet, and My Sweet told me, I have potential to be good poet if I will develop it. When I was invited to join this site, I was excited. I was motivated by the promise gift.Hehehehe When I was in high school around 10 t0 14 years old, I did not much pay attention about it, We were required to submit at least Five to Ten poems to be written in our native language; I was in panic because I waited at the last minute;So I have to ask my Sweet Aunt to help me and come up with more poems, because I had only done a four pieces.:) She was pity with me, so she agreed. In one day.., we're able to come up with the minimum requirements. Yikes! it was a close call!:) I was so pleased that the teacher was very please of the writings and my choice of words. Hehehe and she love it.:) Thanks to the founder of this poetry site, that encourage everyone to share what's in their heart and of course with the rules to follow, and review each other and help one another encourage each other. I am kind of addicted to poetry, I could not sleep when words are floating waiting to be capture. I have to get up and write it, and follow up the next day.By the way, I am sharing the Different types of Poetry, to remind you and myself of the different type so that we will have a better ideas what to write. And when we review others writing, we can understand and we can give a good judgement, kind and fair. Let us Respect each others work, Put your feet on others shoes, Look at the meaning beyond the saying of the poem, leave a comment in assertive way that will encourage me or someone to keep writing and sharing. Here is the following types of poetry: 1. Limerick- A short, humorous poem composed of 5 lines. It has rhyme scheme of aabba. 2. Haiku- A Japanese poem made up of 3 lines with a syllable pattern of 5-7-5 . Concrete- A poem that takes the shape of the poem's topic. 4. Couplet- A two-lined rhyming poem. 5. Diamante- A poem a 7 lines that begins with one noun and ends with that noun's opposite. 6. Free-verse- Poetry that does not contain regular patterns of rhythm or rhyme. Hurray! Just reach the Legendary level as I set to be reach exactly midnight of May 3rd 2012.:) Good morning to myself thanks to all the supporters.:) Hope you will reach yours too. and by the way, My Pin arrived today May 3;12.:)TY My heart flip flops! hehehe wink! I am on Tag site. Welcome to add me. I'm the founder of "You are not alone club get advice, in yahoo." You are invited to join in.:) http://groups.yahoo.com/group/youarenotalonegetadvice/join Let me know.:) Thank you for reading. Take care yourself. Be happy, easy go lucky. God bless. more…

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