Analysis of Distance Between Lover Seem to be Forever (Poem No. 3)
Revised)
Before I lay down to sleep
I love to pray for you my Sweet.
When I close my eyes for awhile,
I see a glimpse of your smile.
Wherever you may go, whatever you may do;
I have miscall or not, I would have to deal with that.
When ever I'm feeling blue, or just lonely for you,
I must not complain..., or be suspicious on you.
Do me a favor be consistent and persistent...
Let's have mutual respect, let's be true to self.
Honesty is the best policy in every relationship.
Without it the ship of companionship will go wreck.
Truth can set us free and gain respect.
Lie is lie, just like a flies, flutter by, like a butterfly.
When I'm awake or going to sleep,
I pray for you in my secret place.
Distance between lover seem to be forever,
But through prayers make us closer ever.
Originally written in March 2012
in rough draft I should not have submitted yet.
Now this is growing up baby poem,ehehhehe
Revised 12-2012
Scheme | ABX CC DX DD XX XX XX BX EE XXXA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 01 0111111 11111111 11111101 1101111 01011110111 111111111111 1101101111011 111011101011 1101010100010 111000111111 1001011000100010 011011010111 111110101 11111011011010 110111011 111101101 100110111010 111111010 010001001 01111110101 111101101 01 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 902 |
Words | 175 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 3, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 4 |
Lines Amount | 23 |
Letters per line (avg) | 31 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 71 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 18 |
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