Analysis of Delicious Sensations



"I love you," she whispers, "my delicate spiritual man, sweet deliverance."
And stars collapse like light; trembling on moist lips; reflected sighs,
eyes spill yellow blooms of beauty into wild lands,
history is a crease within eternity's wonderful thighs,
perfection's delicious sensations are crystal arrangements inside fast fragrance
as summer's quiet desire splashes warm soft hands.

Bands of golden sunshine,
fingered vows, pretty silvered lace,
diamond circular decoration in artistic tides.

Wide open expression dances from a dream's silhouette as his heart spins brilliance,
"I love you," he sings, his musical voice an operatic rise,
skies erupt whilst miniature flowers bloom in sands;
particles of freedom, held between time's dimensional disguise,
then gently, rhythm's personality traits are whittled down into cool silence,
looms of divinity weave melodic commands.

Strands of romance align
themselves with universal grace,
branches of language wash over characters; groom and bride.

Strides of magical tones cross imagination, steps collide with complexity,
individuality sips on the wine of heroic exploits; cream fancy.


Scheme ABCBAC DEX ABCBAC DEX FF
Poetic Form
Metre 11111011001000110100 0101111001110101 111011100111 1001010111001 101001011001001110 1101001010111 11101 1011011 1010001000101 1100101010101111110 111111100110101 101110010101 1001101011010001 110101001110101110 110100101001 110101 0110101 10110110100101 1110011001010110100 000100110110101110
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 1,118
Words 168
Sentences 7
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 3, 6, 3, 2
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 186
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Submitted on August 19, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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