Analysis of david and mona



David?
A bachelor?
Why,
when Mona Lisa is not taken?
Is he not drawn
by her amazing beauty,
and the innocence in her eyes?
Her closed lips silent,
never to lie.
Is he among those who laud her creator?
Tell me David, are you that guy,
Who love searches for
in her childlike eyes?
Did you vow celibacy
If not her touch?
Did she ever whisper:
“I love you so much?”
Why then David
Naked you stand,
Exposing life’s small measures.
Tell me Mona,
did he cause nature's electric surge,
or did he hurt is cause?
His posture tells his every word,
more than his lips ever did.
David you are aging.
Get your act together.


Scheme ABCDEFGHCBCIGFJBJAKLMNOPAQB
Poetic Form
Metre 10 0100 1 110101110 1111 1001010 00100001 01110 1011 11011110010 11101111 11101 0011 1111000 1101 111010 11111 1110 1011 0101110 1110 111100101 111111 110111001 1111101 101110 111010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 589
Words 117
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 27
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 466
Words per stanza (avg) 116
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Earle Francis Brown

I was born in Montego Bay, Jamaica. I was told that I can write, so I wrote and continues to write. I am currently living in Cincinnati, Ohio, USA. I enjoy reading "real" poetry. My favorite books are the Pslams, Proverbs and Songs of Solomon.Poetry is not just vocabulary, and use of metaphors and formats. Don't be tricked. Poetry should speak life. I love a poem that tells a story. The most memorable poems are the ones that tell someone's story. I don't care about ratings; the truth is always hated. People are people where-ever we go. more…

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