Analysis of Dark Savior



At least I knew who I was
But these shadows seem to know me better
I wish I could know you
The shadows seem to shy away from your beauty
Would you keep me under your wing?
Your sweet scent fills my senses
I know that you are my dark protecting angel
Even if you don’t know my appreciation
Or that you are my savior from this shadowed hell
Each glance for each second
Equals an hour of sunlight
The sunlight of your eyes and smile
Keeping me warm
Until you turn the corner
And the shadows seep back into place


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1111111 111111110 111111 01111011110 11111011 1111110 111111101010 10111110010 111111011101 111110 1011011 0111101 1011 0111010 00111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 496
Words 101
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 15
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 406
Words per stanza (avg) 101
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Brittani Bowden

My name's Brittani, I'm 15 years old, and I've been writing poetry for the last few years. I have written around 90 poems in that time. Not entirely sure if that's a great feat or not, but I'm happy with it nonetheless ^-^ And, of course, I will be adding and adding and adding and- okay, you get the point- to my "archive" (isn't that an awesome word? :3) of poetry for as long as I live...And maybe even after O_o Anyway, to whoever reads my poetry, I hope you like it and can be inspired by it. Any comments, suggestions, or criticism is greatly appreciated. P.S. I am fairly psychotic >:D and also comletely random. CRANBERRY-SAUCE!!! Anyway, enjoy my poetry :)or not...You're choice. haha more…

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