Analysis of Cry Baby



I focus on the little things
because I'm really scared
How could someone love me
Why should someone care

I know that I'm not worth the cost
It's all there in the book
Tallied and accounted for
Whingeing little sook

Why then did you have me
I wish I wasn't born
Alone depressed and anxious
In my room forlorn

I guess they did the best they could
with the skills they had
Belting little children
They didn't know it's bad

Their parents did the same to them
and they turned out ok (??)
"DON'T ANSWER BACK -
YOU'LL GET A SMACK!!"

Back then it was the way
Silence then was golden

Little kids don't have a say

Please read -
"Little girl, where have you gone?"
(By Louise Vorster) and Melissa Metzger's poems
This iz for them...


Scheme XXAX XBXB ACXC XDED FGHH GE G XXXF
Poetic Form
Metre 11010101 011101 11111 1111 11111101 111001 1000101 1101 111111 111101 0101010 01101 11110111 10111 101010 110111 11010111 011111 1101 1101 111101 101110 1011101 11 1011111 101100101010 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 695
Words 140
Sentences 4
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 1, 4
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 70
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on August 20, 2014

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Dana Moon

Yeah Scotty.... I wuz.... In my day!! :> lol********************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************************FEATURE POET OF THE WEEK - SCOTT MOULTHROP"very unusual but funny seriously thankyou for posting that was great Thankyou" (Tyler Zickgraf)*********************************************************************************************************************************Seriously Scotty, I truly value,appreciate and consider your comments more…

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