Analysis of Counting Time




Time basically, is a linear line,
Yes, a linear line of rotations,
Traveling none stop for you and I.
This has been my thesis, my dissertation,
So as to speak of; my theory on time and space.
The moon rotates around the earth,
And as the earth rotates, this is one day.
Rotating around the sun in a free fall,
One year is formed as we make a full circle.
In other words, simply put, one cycle of rotations,
A journey around the sun; time in motion!
But it does not stop there, you know?
Around and around the Milky Way here we go.
The Milky Way rotated as it travels,
Into the scope of an endless void of dark,
Which only the stars in space light the way.
When the rotation of all things comes to a stop,
Then time will no longer hold its power of rotation.
The linear line of rotation will cease to be,
And time will take on a new form, a new motion.
Time will equal infinity constant squared,
And I will be there to do the math counting time.

Rîchård Açévédø
5/23/13


Scheme XAXBXXCXXABDDXXCXBEBXX EX
Poetic Form
Metre 1100101001 1010011010 100111101 1111101010 111111101101 0110101 010111111 1001010011 11111110110 01011011101010 01001011010 11111111 010010101111 0101101110 01011110111 1100101101 100101111101 11111011101010 0100110101111 011110110110 11100100101 011111101101 111011 1
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 962
Words 190
Sentences 12
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 22, 2
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 376
Words per stanza (avg) 95
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Submitted on February 21, 2017

Modified on April 17, 2023

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