Analysis of Counting The Miles



Although we are miles apart
I feel your presence in my heart
Yet the days and nights linger on
Like a bluebird singing an eternal song
I long for your bedroom eyes
To gaze me into dreams
To deliver me from my reality
and cornered, shadowy fiends
Won't you ease my mind, dear conscience?
Give me solemn slumber and take heed
I am weary of fixating on fiery stars
that my thoughts must feed
I hunger for her intimate bliss
Her frailty to the touch
A fleeing soul with battered wings
Whose heart is not as such


Scheme AABCDEFGHIJIKLML
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 11110011 10101101 1011010101 111111 111011 101011110 0101001 11111110 111010011 11101111001 11111 110101001 010101 01011101 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 492
Words 97
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 407
Words per stanza (avg) 97
Font size:
 

Submitted on October 07, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

29 sec read
2

Discuss this Chris Curasi poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Counting The Miles" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 24 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/68607/counting-the-miles>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    7
    days
    21
    hours
    21
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    A figure of speech that compares two unlike things using "like" or "as" is called a _______.
    A personification
    B hyperbole
    C simile
    D metaphor