Analysis of Considerate



Thank you,
for your kind gift,
my heart leapt inside joy,
fluttered fast in pleasure's wild dance:
so fine.

Tears fell,
for the flowers
were truly welcome here,
they brightened up this grey morning,
and laughed.

With grace,
I accept these,
their scent is beautiful,
they're now with water in a vase,
fragrant.

Soft soul,
you are a gent,
considerate and bright,
I drifted into smiles in dreams:
floated.

This day
truly I'm blessed,
a wonderful surprise,
I'll cherish these in memory,
my love.

Thank you,
for the flowers,
their scent is beautiful,
I drifted into smiles in dreams,
my love.

Cinquain Garland:
A six stanza cinquain sequence...where the final cinquain is formed from a line from each of the previous cinquains...


Scheme Axxbx xCxxx dxEdx xxxFx xxxxG ACEFG xb
Poetic Form
Metre 11 1111 111011 1010111 11 11 1010 010101 11011110 01 11 1011 111100 11110001 10 11 1101 010001 11001101 10 11 1011 010001 11010100 11 11 1010 111100 11001101 11 110 01101101011110111101001
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 693
Words 123
Sentences 9
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 5, 2
Lines Amount 32
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted on October 17, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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