Analysis of Climbing Out



As I was falling,
I reached out for familiar branches,
Branches once so strong and supportive.
When my hand touched one
I could not grasp the smooth worn surface.
I reached for another.
The dead wood gave way to my weight.
Another only broke my skin
with sharp barbs.
Some branches slowed my descent
but couldn't stop the plunging.
I reached for new growth.
Untested limbs.
In my desperation I grabbed.
Smaller, but more supple in its newness.
Bending to my weight, but supporting me.
Following its growth,
I learned a new way out.
Thank God that branch was there.
Reaching out to me as I reached out to it.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJAKLMENKOPQ
Poetic Form Tetractys  (35%)
Etheree  (30%)
Metre 11110 111101010 101110010 11111 111101110 111010 01111111 01010111 111 1101101 1101010 11111 0101 0101011 1011100110 1011110101 10011 110111 111111 10111111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 588
Words 110
Sentences 14
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 478
Words per stanza (avg) 110
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Submitted on March 24, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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