Analysis of Circular Advances



Wild instability flaps leather wings
as overwhelming sensations reflect
insecurity's cold environment,
the swirls on her tongue swerve across this love,
falling through parallel worlds; full colour,
this black and white status slips in silence.
Failure hangs upon every melted word;
drops of language, communication's pride,
and circumstance spasms while rapid eyes
catch butterfly shapes; angles breathe angels.
Twitches flutter above the cheek's control,
negative undertones wink as they crash,
imagination's astral projection
provides her imagery while wonder sighs,
perhaps she dreams too of my circular
advances while her feet ripple my heart.


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKLMIEN
Poetic Form
Metre 101001101 101001001 110100 0110110111 10110111 1101101010 10101100101 111000101 010101101 110110110 1010010101 100101111 110010 0101001101 0111111100 0101011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 633
Words 93
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 538
Words per stanza (avg) 93
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Submitted on January 03, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ian Sawicki

Ian Sawicki has been writing poetry for over twenty years. He is a Manchester born poet, who has dedicated his life to exploration and composition of poetry. His work reflects the many great influential experiences of his life, the pain, the pleasure combined to create new exciting poetry. If anyone is interested in my books then please visit my lulu storefront. All artwork on these books is by my own hand. http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday more…

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