Analysis of Catch the air



Try to catch the air
 Deliver badly and expect fair
 Stare and simply look at sky
 Raise the questions and ask only why?

Think about sun coming from east?
 Trouble in mind for its setting in west
 No cool ideas emerging in moon light
 Think of nothing except wrong or right

Help not for self elevation
 Raise unnecessary and lots of questions
 You may have nothing to satisfy
 It will worsen only and not simplify

Trust and confidence only may prevail
 Rest everything will disappear or fail
 Nothing may stop at simple will
 It is up to you how to feel

No advice is  needed
 Not necessarily also to be heeded
 Act as per conscience and leave it to fate
 Success may surely come even very late


Scheme AABB XXCC XXBB DDXX EEFF
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Tetractys  (25%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 11101 010100011 1010111 101001101 10111011 1001111001 11010010011 111001111 1111010 1010001110 11110110 1110100110 1010010101 11010111 10111101 11111111 101110 10100101110 1111001111 01110110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 687
Words 129
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 110
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 28, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Hasmukh Mehta

am an ex-serviceman from Indian Air force. I joined Oriental Insurance Company and retired from there too in May, 2007. I have been graduated from Punjab University. I hold technical qualification like Diploma in Radio/engineering .I have done English and Hindi stenography as well. I had mastered the art in Morse telephony too. I am associated with several welfare organizations and served long time as Union leader too. I am at present working as hobby writer. I write poems on various subjects and invite suggestions from all the quarters. I have written one memoir named “As I see it” and ready for publication. One interesting part of writing I would love to share with all my reader friends. I am not sure weather it may be the same case with all as I do not want to be caught in any controversy. When I sit on my personal computer, there is absolutely no thought in mind as to what is to be picked up as thought and written. These all things I leave it to the discretion of almighty to fill my mind with relevant ideas. So far I have been graced by Him and as result able to compose about 4000 poems. I have be awarded with 4 achievement award from the www.ezinearticles.com for successfully meeting with their standard. I am writing on many sites so as to be associated with reader friends all over the world. I am thankful to all those who have supported me in my initial days. more…

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