Analysis of Cant i Be Left Alone?



-as i keep standing
-in the mist of the world
-and i gazed through
-the roving sky
-and smelling the scents
-of the willing winds
-lost in the thoughts of life

cant i be left alone?

-left and right
-front and back
-the winds of life blows
-both cold and warm
-with its strange wings
-runnig against my blood
-in its carefree mood
-not minding my red pains
-carring the burden
-of the whole world
-in my little lonely head

But cant i be left lone?

-why do the world
-only remembers me
-when they need my hand?
-i say why cant i be left alone?

by: Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi (C) March, 2014


Scheme XAXXXXX B XXXXXXXXXAX B AXXB X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (48%)
Metre 11110 001101 0111 0101 01001 10101 100111 111101 101 101 01111 1101 1111 10111 0111 110111 1010 1011 0110101 111111 1101 100101 11111 111111101 11111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 555
Words 112
Sentences 5
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 7, 1, 11, 1, 4, 1
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 19
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Submitted on April 21, 2015

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Ofuonyebi 'Dinobi

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