Analysis of Canopy

Kathy A. Wittman 1949 (Tennessee)



As I sit on my sturdy, rough-hewn bench,
so carefully constructed beneath this vast
canopy of aspen and spruce, I furtively scan
for my daughter's carved initials,
paired with her predestined soul mate.
Only indecipherable, random designs
of knotted aspen bark remain.

We survived those bittersweet days, finding
refuge in this consecrated dwelling place,
behind rustic pine walls, as the fierce winds
of Centennial Ridge roared incessantly.
Our cabin burned down awhile back,
consumed by wanton neglect, as we were.

Now the wilderness yields itself to vain,
frantic human endeavor, as I idly watch
this massive concrete foundation thrust
its way through these barren ashes.
Others will seek refuge here beneath
this vast canopy, come next spring.


Scheme XXXXXXA BXXXXX AXXXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 1111110111 11000100111 1001100111001 11101010 1101011 1011001 11010101 101110110 1001100101 0110111011 10100110100 101011011 0111001110 1010010111 101001011101 110010101 11111010 101110101 11100111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 729
Words 117
Sentences 6
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 6
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 203
Words per stanza (avg) 39
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Modified on April 02, 2023

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Kathy A. Wittman

I am a retired college teacher. In the past, I taught classes in Education, English, and Psychology. At present, I am focused on developing my potential as an artist and writer. I have self-published books in the genres of autobiography, fiction, and poetry. I have a Bachelor's Degree in English from the University of Tennessee (1972), a Master's Degree in Educational Psychology from the University of Tennessee (1983), and a Doctoral Degree in Educational Foundations from the University of Wyoming (1988). I have taken numerous college classes in Art and Creative Writing over the past decade. I completed an Associate Degree in Art from the Laramie County Community College (Cheyenne, Wyoming) in 2018, and I completed a Bachelor's Degree in Art from the University of Wyoming (Laramie, Wyoming) in 2020. I consider myself to be a "Life-long Learner". more…

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