Analysis of Breathe on me!



sometimes l feel l walk
alone in my fear l find no
rest,l've even thought
of giving up knowing l
would fail the test,that's
when you breathe on
me,you breathe on me,
letting me know l am somebody
l'm not afraid
what l see, so glad you
breathe on me, thank you
lord for be so good to me
l won't let go lord
when my heart is sad
you are my helper
thank you jesus for teaching
me about life,can't nobody do me
like JESUS!


Scheme ABCDEFGGHIIGJKLMGE
Poetic Form
Metre 011111 01011111 1101 1101101 1101 1111 1111 10111110 11101 111111 11111 1111111 11111 11111 11110 1110110 1011111 110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 401
Words 90
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 18
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 320
Words per stanza (avg) 86
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Submitted on January 15, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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