Analysis of Bottles from the Spring



When I was ten
I two-stepped down a country path
To a wooded spring which erupted softly
Near the outskirts of my summertime home.

When my hands were smaller
They touched through that wet transparency
To find that a tadpole
Is quicker than the eye.

When my eyes were young
They watched a wrinkled, brown woman
Overflow large bottles for
Her house was dry and the fresh water free.


Scheme XXAX XAXX XXXA
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 11110101 1010111010 10111101 111010 111110100 11101 110101 11101 11010110 101101 0111001101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 369
Words 69
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 102
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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