Analysis of Bluesday

Andy Lyle 1951 (Londonderry)



Sun please don't rise tomorrow
Or the next day if you can
As my aching heart can't face another day
Let nights cloak wrap around me
And hide me from my woes
When I lay my head to pillow
And my eyes I finally close

Let not my heart be troubled
By the problems of the day
So I can sleep at peace with all the world
And if daylight don't break my slumber
Or some nightmare from the past
I shall sleep until the nightfall
When I will be safe at last


Scheme AXBXXAX XBXXCXC
Poetic Form
Metre 111101 1011111 11101110101 1111011 011111 11111110 01111001 1111110 1010101 1111111101 01111110 111101 1110101 1111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 432
Words 93
Sentences 1
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 7
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 175
Words per stanza (avg) 47
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Submitted by andylyle1 on February 06, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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