Analysis of Bejeweled shrouded sky




A nearly full moon night,

Fluffy clouds graze by.

Tender breeze nips gently,

The slumbering trees good night.

Staring at the starry sky,

And the near full moon glowing by,

Musing at the painted dark,

I stand beneath the shrouded sky…

I've lost you today,

You are never going to come by.

You parted at the strangest times,

Without a note or good bye.

You were never the one so near,

You couldn't dry my eyes,

Yet now I feel you in air,

Caressing me as you go by.

Some bonds aren't made of gold,

Some do have their thorny side,

Yet amidst this starry sky.

I stand to remember to cry….

Tears of love held back in time

As I see someone you left by,

Clogging the love for you again,

I rush to set things right!

I stare at the sky some more

Hoping to see a glimpse, a sign.

All that is a near  full moon,

And the bejeweled shrouded sky,

I silently swallow my tears ,

And slowly say goodbye…


Scheme A B X A B B X B X B X B X X X B X X B B X B X A X X X B X B
Poetic Form Etheree  (27%)
Metre 010111 10111 101110 0100111 1010101 00111101 1010101 11010101 11101 111010111 11010101 0101111 10100111 110111 1111101 01011111 1110111 1111101 1011101 11101011 1111101 1111111 10011101 111111 1110111 10110101 1110111 001101 11001011 01011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 861
Words 173
Sentences 10
Stanzas 30
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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Submitted on October 15, 2013

Modified on March 05, 2023

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