Analysis of Beach house girl



Empty coral sheets
Fragrant into absence
 Of a stillness warming fonder
And the essence of her...
Lingers longer and longer

My beach house girl
Always breaks away before the dawn
But, ocean breezes seem to whisper back
Her nightgown trails
Are spilling carelessly across the lawn

Silhouettes seeping through the sea grass
 Backdrops into a breathless angel young
Sea gulls swooning about her ebony statue
As morning waves crashing out sultry song

As I near unto her
The once thought nakedness disappears…
Into sun rises between her legs
Underneath to the painting up, upon her dress
And strawberry creams ignite
Into angelic tresses of halo flare

My beach house baby barefoot
 Toes curling up within the powder sands
And I hide among the dunes and gaze…
 Upon her curves of splendor from where I stand

She is my Earth born organic goddess
From her head, deep down unto her soul
Then my glimpses catch those azure eyes
Unto moments where two shore line lovers stroll

My beach house girl
And her deep baby blues
Melting captivation unto my senses
As she swallows me up, along with the instance
Of this summer's glorious afternoon


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Poetic Form
Metre 10101 100110 10101010 001010 1010010 1111 11010101 1101011101 011 1101000101 01101011 101010101 11100101001 1101101101 111100 011101 011100101 01101010101 010101 0110101101 111101 1101010101 011010101 01011101111 1111101010 101111001 111011101 10101111101 1111 001101 10110110 111011011010 111010001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,099
Words 193
Sentences 2
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 4, 6, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 132
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Nighttiger

A fortyish native born all American man. Married twice and for the last time. I have four children; Three daughters and one son that are all over the age of eighteen. I also have two grandchildren; one three years old and one nine months old. Inspired by God, tragedy, life's experiences and then a fairy tale love. I never intentionally set out to write poetry, but "She" inspired me. "She" meaning the love of my life. That love is a passion that after thirteen years still grows stronger each and every day. It eventually had to be put into writing. As I wrote poetry to her, she encouraged me to approach other subjects. Doing so brought me to discover that poetry could wash away the bitter tastes of life (suicide, cancer, and divorce) that were still living like demons inside me. So when poetic therapy brought those impish fiends to a stalemate, I began to experiment more. Creating fictional characters and situations within my works. The support of this online community has inspired me even further to continue to hone my writing skills giving the readers the best that I can offer. Thanks to all you out there in Lulu land. more…

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