Analysis of Banished



You banish me,
from ever feeling..
Feeling anything more real
realer then the pain..
The indescribable chain..
Break these chain off of me..
Break this life of concluded twisted desires..
Desires to be free...
free of my own disrupted thoughts...

I thought you might have looked,
I thought you might have just cared...

I thought you might of known I even left...
The only thing left is the chains
on the torture chair.


Scheme AXXBBAXAX XX XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101 11010 101011 1101 001001 111111 111101010010 010111 11110101 111111 1111111 1111111101 01011101 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 405
Words 73
Sentences 10
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 2, 3
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 24
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Submitted on June 30, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

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