Analysis of Back with family
You were in hiding
For years together without confiding
Not making any move
For fears to remove
You are back with family
By the grace of almighty
You may be enjoying good meal
I miss you forever in real
Each time you step out
Moon too comes out from cloud
Whole path lit up with joy
Why should I leg behind to enjoy?
You had jealousy
With picture so rosy
But believe it was me just behind
To follow you and find
I race and stop near
Behind your back to utter dear
You look back with more of disbelief
I smile and respond with relief
You are still down with old memory
I feel a lot but how to say sorry
You were never far but confined to walls
How could I make any sincere call?
I respond with much of trust
As I feel it is must
Before coming to fold
You must be reassured and told
I shall have to secure
Your old tradition and future
That shall not be same again
But I must assure it sans pain
I wish to reiterate
And plainly state
That it is not the ultimate fate
But we are little late
I wish to be same gain
Dearest as you call often
The move should come from you
If that is to be believed as true
| Scheme | AABB CCDD XXEE CCFF GGHH CCXX IIJJ XXXK LLLL KXMM |
|---|---|
| Poetic Form | Quatrain (60%) Etheree (35%) Tetractys (23%) |
| Metre | 10010 1101001010 110101 11101 1111100 1011010 11101011 11101001 11111 111111 111111 111101101 11100 110110 101111101 110101 11011 01111101 11111101 11001101 111111100 1101111110 1010110111 111110011 1011111 111111 011011 1110101 111101 11010010 1111101 11101111 111010 0101 111101001 111101 111111 1011110 011111 111110111 |
| Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
| Characters | 1,061 |
| Words | 226 |
| Sentences | 3 |
| Stanzas | 10 |
| Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
| Lines Amount | 40 |
| Letters per line (avg) | 22 |
| Words per line (avg) | 6 |
| Letters per stanza (avg) | 87 |
| Words per stanza (avg) | 23 |
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Submitted on January 13, 2013
Modified on March 05, 2023
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