Analysis of As you open the door to my heart



I've never felt like this before
My whole body wakes
As you open the door
My heart breaks.

You are the one I was waiting for
It was your heart I wished to know
I've never wanted to let you go
It was our love I wished to grow.

If only you knew
How long I've been waiting for you
As you open the door
And walk around the floor
My heart beats so fast; I don't know where to start.

It was your body that I touched
I wanted your presence to ever last
But you've gone way too fast
I'm starting to imagine the past.

If only you knew
How many nights I spent thinking of you
As you open the door
And walk slowly to my bed
My heart suddenly soar
The clouds tears are the ones I shed.

All I've ever wanted is right here
Yet I don't know where to start
You feel so close; so near
I wish I knew how to enchant you.

If only you knew
How bad I want to hug you
As you open the door to my heart
Once again; I wish you would stay
You dry my tears away
Accidentally I hear you say:
"I love you - let me stay".


Scheme abAb accc DdAae xfff DdAgag xexd Ddehhhh
Poetic Form
Metre 11011101 11101 111001 111 110111101 11111111 110101111 111011111 11011 11111011 111001 010101 11111111111 11110111 1101101101 111111 110101001 11011 1101111011 111001 0110111 111001 01110111 111010111 1111111 111111 111111011 11011 1111111 111001111 10111111 111101 01001111 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 957
Words 213
Sentences 7
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 6, 4, 7
Lines Amount 34
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 30
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Submitted on November 30, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:06 min read
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Shir Hanochi

"life isn't measured by the numbers of breaths you take, but by the moments that take your breath away". With my poetry, I want to make more of those breathtaking moments, to put everything I feel into words and let everyone else enjoy it as well as learning from it.English is not my first language, therefore I'd like to hear any grammar or spelling mistakes. Thank you all for understanding, and enjoy reading. :) more…

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