Analysis of As If To As Is



Act "as if" you're patient.
Pretend your storm is calm.
Habits become the "as is."
Repeat the Sanskrit om.

Act "as if" you're loving.
Pretend your heart is warm.
Habits become the "as is."
Attain the higher form.

Act "as if" you're healthy.
Pretend your ill is gone.
Habits become the "as is."
Observe the brighter dawn.

Act "as if" you're gifted.
Pretend your wit is bright.
Habits become the "as is."
Practice the found insight.

Act "as if" you're sportive.
Pretend your skill is peak.
Habits become the "as is."
Parade the best technique.

Act "as if" you're gracious.
Pretend your mode is kind.
Habits become the "as is."
Display the style of mind.


Scheme xaBa xcBc xdBd xeBe xfBf xgBg
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 111110 011111 1001011 010101 111110 011111 1001011 010101 111110 011111 1001011 010101 111110 011111 1001011 10011 11111 011111 1001011 010101 111110 011111 1001011 010111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 628
Words 121
Sentences 24
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 81
Words per stanza (avg) 19
Font size:
 

Submitted on January 13, 2010

Modified on March 05, 2023

36 sec read
0

Wallace Dean LaBenne

Professor, therapist, author and poet. more…

All Wallace Dean LaBenne poems | Wallace Dean LaBenne Books

5 fans

Discuss this Wallace Dean LaBenne poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "As If To As Is" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 1 May 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/66134/as-if-to-as-is>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    May 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    30
    days
    16
    hours
    35
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "O Captain! My Captain!"?
    A Walt Whitman
    B Emily Dickinson
    C Samuel Taylor Coleridge
    D Ezra Pound