Analysis of Aquisition



If all that I know, is all that you've shown me-
Then all I can do, is what you have done.

This restricted education permitts no pleasure of knowledge
I become another member of your belief system, another deliverer of your message.
A faith cannot exist without a cause to believe in
Your justification is again another passed on shared concept, unshared but imposed in your conditioning

Your invented religion is a form of your own control,
A community of morals
Needed no doubt, for equilibrium, consensus, a rule book to live to until old.

Yet if I submit to your lessons in life
I am merely to repeat your stresses and strife

If I do not do, as you have shown me
Then I can learn, what you have not.


Scheme AX BBXX XXX CC AX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111111 1111111111 10100101110110 1010101011011001001001110 01100101011010 10010101010111101101010100 101001010111101 00100110 101110100010011111011 11101111001 111010111001 1111111111 11111111
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 691
Words 131
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 3, 2, 2
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 111
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Submitted on May 02, 2011

Modified on April 25, 2023

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Kllaire

Life has a funny way of throwing lots at you, and we as humans make some pretty odd choices at times too, based on all kinds of emotions.I have no outlet for how I feel as at all times, I have to be professional, a mother or a wife. Poetry is my way of taking a feeling and allowing it to turn into what ever it wants.My writing is emotive and pretty simple. I guess I just wanna say how I feel. Thanks for looking, Kllaire more…

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