Analysis of Anemic.....



I come across such beauty

she looks right through me

got one hour of sleep

I cant stand to see my eyes go black

is this a dream

am I awake

please don't wake me

please don't wake me

please don't wake me

why do I feel.....so good

I just been

ripped from this life of pain

I never want to be in love

I know this is a dream

But she looks so colorful in all that black

my hands are warm

my heart is beating

sketching into myself has burned a fire in me

she glides right pass me

I reach for a rose

it freezes in my hand

I'm back to my old self....


Scheme a a x b c x A A A x x x x c b x x a a x x x
Poetic Form
Metre 1101110 11111 111011 111111111 1101 1101 1111 1111 1111 11111 111 111111 11011101 111101 11111000111 1111 11110 100111101001 11111 11101 110011 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 549
Words 123
Sentences 3
Stanzas 22
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 19
Words per stanza (avg) 5
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Milton

Poems....are what keeps me going.... Poems are what stops me....My name is Milton...I am young My name is Milton...I am Naive My name is Milton...Doesn't matter... What I say..How I say it...My name is Milton...I thank you for letting me share my burden with you...But I must Warn you...My name is Milton... more…

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