Hello



So you took me for granted

so I took and took and took some more

and the mist around you

draining my perception

every day I see you I forget a little more

every drink I take I begin to wish for more

tearing out my memories

sweating out my gestures

feel my touch on your....

Feel my touch on your passionate cry

the every day guide to him

in his name we feel

in his name we feel

in his name we feel

if you bring death to the living

making the o sweet pain go away

I will still take your hand

in his name we failed

in his name I was dead before I said hello....

Hello......

By the way it ends at Hello....
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

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Scheme x a x x a a x x a x x B B B x x x x c c
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 583
Words 127
Stanzas 20
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Milton

Poems....are what keeps me going.... Poems are what stops me....My name is Milton...I am young My name is Milton...I am Naive My name is Milton...Doesn't matter... What I say..How I say it...My name is Milton...I thank you for letting me share my burden with you...But I must Warn you...My name is Milton... more…

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