Analysis of After The Fall



It was after the fall

He told me about the time everything changed for him

Birds were coming in

Endless it seemed

Each carrying the carcasses of war

The real carnage

He was standing in the swirl

Couldn't really see much

The bird having fulfilled its mission

Presented him the stretcher

There lay us

Stilled by the conflict

When an arm got loose

And slipped for the poncho liner

Meant for shelter

Almost feminine hand

But the watch

That cursed watch

Loosened by the day's events

But still there

On that boyish crimson wrist

Those other hands

While its host lies so still


Scheme X X X X X X X X X A X X X A A X B B X X X X X
Poetic Form
Metre 111001 111010110111 10100 1011 1100010011 0110 1110001 101011 011001110 0101010 111 11010 11111 01101010 1110 11001 101 111 1010101 111 1110101 1101 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 654
Words 120
Sentences 1
Stanzas 23
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 20
Words per stanza (avg) 4
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Submitted on January 25, 2012

Modified on April 20, 2023

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