Analysis of A Step In the Right Direction



An old and wise hobbit once said,
"It's dangerous business, walking out your front door".
But he nonetheless allowed himself to be led
Into the most epic journey of ancient lore.

I, for one, will follow his lead
And step well beyond my threshold,
For if there's one thing in life that I need,
It's a little adventure, new and bold.

As my feet cross the confines of my door frame,
I'll completely forget everything that I've been told
About living a sheltered life, safe and tame,
And instead discover what adventure my future may hold.


Scheme ABAB ACXC DCDC
Poetic Form Quatrain 
Metre 1101111 110010101111 11010101111 010110101101 11111011 0110111 1111101111 1010010101 1111011111 101001101111 01100101101 001010101011011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 524
Words 96
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on April 13, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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el_cazador_verde

I am a university student from Texas, and a bit of a closet-poet. Perhaps I should keep it in the closet, but I am interested in getting feedback on some of my poetry. Let me know what you think! I used to write a lot of poetry when I was a little kid, but eventually lost interest as I got older. I started writing poetry again as a form of art-therapy during a really hard time in my life. I like to try to experiment with different styles and strange metaphors. Understandably, this can make some of my poetry less accessible at times, but occasionally I feel like it pays off. more…

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