Analysis of A Passionate Kiss



Feelings of comfort
That where my heart can endlessly rest
The contents darkly of my mind, I dare not speak
Keeping my tounge in cheek
The act of kindness, an idea so bold
But holding you in my arms, a passionate fold
Drawing me in through your eyes
Drawn together, like the seas and the skies
Lips lock, a short lasting but longing bliss
To embrace for us, a passionate kiss

To hold in my will
Time and space both hold still
It's not any lustful temptation, or sinful charms
Not a moment outside the embrace of your arms
Fly my body in a down low
To that secret place all souls go
To a place of rest
To lay my weary head on your breast

Myself in a trance of divine
Like a drunkard, filled with sweet wine
None would dare take that moment, not even death
No, he wouldn't dare to take your breath
As the stars within, a wonder the day old night
For me, such a wonderful delight
For we were together then
As I ask, when could it happen again?


Scheme XABBCCDDEE FFGGHHAA IIJJKKLL
Poetic Form
Metre 10110 111111001 010101111111 101101 01110101011 110101101001 1010111 1010101001 1101101101 1011101001 11011 101111 1110100101101 101011001111 11100011 11101111 10111 111101111 1001101 10101111 11111101101 111011111 101010100111 111010001 1100101 1111111001
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 915
Words 185
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 10, 8, 8
Lines Amount 26
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 247
Words per stanza (avg) 62
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Submitted on June 01, 2012

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Joseph Shofner

I'm 17, soon to turn 18 this Summer. I'm going to college to become a Geologist this Summer & following Fall. I like writing poems, but I've somewhat stopped in the past month or so. But in the time I did write (For about 6 months - 1 year) I wrote several hundred, most of which I "fixed" by making them better. Most of my poems are about love, as love is a very important (but not prominent) thing in my life. I believe love is an expression of the best of things, and poetry is an expression of love, so with poetry I express my love (Since I can't in other ways) I'll try to publish a poem a day (Maybe more, as I have them written down, but have to re-type them all when publishing them onto here) Also I'm working on a booklet of around 30-50 of my best poems re-mastered to try & win a girl I like over. I don't know who she is, as the school year is about over, but I'm sure I'll meet someone at college who appreciates it as much as I do. Any questions/ want to talk message me at joealexshof@yahoo.com more…

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