Analysis of A better me



Wanting to wash this waste away
Trying to trash the tears that taint
Being bitter burns my being
Constant creation of lyrics to comfort

Run the risk of burning out
Take the chance, one chapter more
Fingers fly and feelings fade
Sinking now, and someday soar.

Mistakes I've made, now I mend
Heart I lost, lives again
People may judge and jury me
But I will be a better me.


Scheme XXXX XAXA XXBB
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 10111101 10110111 10101110 10010110110 1011101 1011101 1010101 101011 0111111 111101 10110101 11110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 360
Words 70
Sentences 2
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on April 23, 2023

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amy elizabeth hand

I have always loved writing, all types, but especially in partnership with my music. I sing and write melodies for the words which I create. I am passionate about this. Hopefully, someday it will all pay off. Until then, I will enjoy this for what it is. more…

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