Analysis of In a moment

ADEGBITE EMMANUEL 2000 (OSUN STATE)



Oh joy of the past,
That is full of so much
Pleasure,
Contentiously we embrace our
Little success
With optimistic mind, we hope for more.

Alas,
The joy faded away without signal,
Our hopeless state of mind is what you oppress the more,
Yelling at us and depriving us from what is meant  for us,
Attacking us and killing our glorious Vision;
Is your pride!

Come back to us, our prime!
For us to wipe off our cries,,
Oh, our land Prime.
Thy absence have swallowed our dignity and happiness,
Our worthless commander chased thee, away for their pocket sake,
Picturing philanthropist and benevolent to us, for their pocket sake.

Prime Di Primus,where hath thou be?
We went for a cup, but our land has ceased the stream from flowing.
We went for harvest, but the land yield nothing.
The tree sap couldn't  be found
Come back, O ye prime.

Bring back the joy that inspires,
The joy that rekindle us.
The joy borne in us have been ceased off,
And sent to a desolate kingdom.
Put back in us, our joy that was stolen.
Place in us the ancient smiles,
Let the earth smile on that inhabitants.

Heal the land from it source,
Safe the infants from the weeping tales of the past.
"In our days, gun men works on farm,
Land yield bountifully,
Merchant slept all days for no patronage,
We lay in peace and listen to mud songs of the flying birds. "

Safe us from this tales and give the land its healing.


Scheme AXBBXC XDCEFX GXGEHH XIIXG XEXXFXX XAXDXX I
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 111111 10 110110 1001 101011111 01 0110010110 10101111110101 101100101111111 01010101010010 111 1111101 11111101 11011 110110101000100 1010010110111101 1000100001001111101 111111 1110111011101110 11110101110 0111011 11111 1101101 0110101 011011111 011010010 11011011110 1010101 1011110100 101111 101010101101 010111111 111 1011111100 110101011110101 111110101110
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,386
Words 259
Sentences 16
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 5, 7, 6, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 155
Words per stanza (avg) 37
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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ADEGBITE EMMANUEL

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