Analysis of Memorial



Dark clouds scuttle heavy and full
cold wind biting at the exposed flesh
brown grass crusted with rotten snow
abandoned Park ignored by those passing by

often passing fleeing quickly by
thoughts of the meaning rotting deep inside
feelings long festered buried deep within
fear of them escaping and being then expressed

eyes still riveted in this passing by
aching heart swollen needing to be there
pausing in the journey turning in alone
emptiness waiting abandoned by them all

footsteps halting accented by tapping cane
hesitantly approaching what does there lie
downward cast looking wanting not to see
fearfully gazing at last on what lies there

cold stone line emboss with tarnished brass
forgotten words stated speaking of the loss
memories are not captured here in what does lie
pain wrote within the soul of the gazing eye

cane falls from fingers numb clatters to the ground
lie in there at the feet in the now

of long walks to the school
learning of forgotten wars
playground games of baseball
against the other team

neighborhood boys together played
in the street in front of our homes
of the dreams in high school
that would never be

TV watching as numbers called
deciding each of our fates
families crying in despair
at numbers way too low

childhood friends too young to be men
marching off to war
evening news watched by all
of the awful toll

trembling as the tears rolled down
choking back the sobs
bending down to lift the cane
and turn and stumble away

forgotten now names etched in brass
faded memories now torn a new
blood in memory does flow


Scheme XXAB BXXX BCXD EBFC GXBB XX HXDX XXHF XXCA XXDX XXEX GXA
Poetic Form
Metre 11101001 111010011 11101101 01010111101 101010101 1101010101 1011010101 111010010101 1110001101 1011010111 10001010001 10010010111 1101001101 10000101111 1011010111 110111111 111011101 01011010101 100111010111 11010110101 1111011101 101101001 111101 1010101 11111 010101 1010101 001011101 101011 11101 11101101 1011101 10010001 110111 1111111 10111 101111 10101 10010111 10101 1011101 0101001 01011101 101001101 1010011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,515
Words 273
Sentences 1
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 29
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 107
Words per stanza (avg) 23
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Submitted by wakofoed on January 30, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:21 min read
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William A. Kofoed

William A. Kofoed was born in Logan Utah. He now lives in Magna Utah. He was a member of Mormon Youth Chorus and the Jay Welch Chorale. He is a published photographer. He started writing poetry in high school and he has been published in Poetry Quarterly, Utah Life and The Route 7 Review. more…

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