Analysis of This Boy I Know

Daniel Millard 1976 (Medford, OR)



I do not want to be this boy
Who shakes inside
He's got not joy
You think that he's cute
But not to him
He's stupid - ugly - full of sin

I want to be the man I see
Sometimes when I glance at me
I do not want to look for long
The hurts too deep
It's far too strong

I want to pretend it's gone away
I'll be someone new today
Who is the real one
How do I know
How will I get there
When will I grow


Scheme AXAXXX BBCXC DDXEXE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 1101 1111 11111 1111 11010111 11110111 0111111 11111111 0111 1111 111011101 111101 11011 1111 11111 1111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 378
Words 92
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 5, 6
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 17
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 31
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Daniel Millard

I have always loved the written word and expressing my truest and highest self. I love books. I love nature and simplicity. My deepest passion is self-love, growth, spiritual journey, and opening my heart to the world. more…

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