Analysis of You

RRMojares 1979 (MANILA)



This day of dues,
lots of errands.
Number on a lane,
Longing to be called.

Nobody can reach,
Only YOU who always watching.
The hours passed,
Only YOU, I can remember.

This day without YOU,
Needed my patience.
I will bring my weapons,
To conquer my fear.

I will end this day,
passing that battle.
Because YOU guided me,
To write my boredom.


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1111 1110 10101 10111 111 1011110 0101 10111010 11011 10110 111110 11011 11111 10110 011101 11110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 324
Words 63
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 65
Words per stanza (avg) 16
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Submitted on October 21, 2020

Modified by eib14 on October 23, 2020

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