You

RRMojares 1979 (MANILA)



This day of dues,
lots of errands.
Number on a lane,
Longing to be called.

Nobody can reach,
Only YOU who always watching.
The hours passed,
Only YOU, I can remember.

This day without YOU,
Needed my patience.
I will bring my weapons,
To conquer my fear.

I will end this day,
passing that battle.
Because YOU guided me,
To write my boredom.
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Submitted on October 21, 2020

Modified by eib14 on October 23, 2020

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX XXXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 324
Words 63
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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