Analysis of She Said Please Write a Poem for Me



She said, "Please write a poem for me."
I told her I would try.
But soon she sailed across the sea
And left me high and dry!

We were just friends and nothing more,
But I still think of her.
And now, beside the ocean's roar,
A strange scene does occur!

I stand here and recite each line
I wrote for her today;
As though this offering of mine
Might reach her ear one day!

I watch the sun sink in the sea
And then I give a smile.
I wonder if she thinks of me
O'er many a distant mile?

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2017


Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF AGAG F
Poetic Form
Metre 111101011 110111 11110101 011101 10110101 111110 01010101 011101 11100111 111001 11110011 110111 11011001 011101 11011111 10100101 10101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 516
Words 109
Sentences 9
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 18, 2020

Modified by RobertHaigh on August 11, 2020

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Robert Haigh

Robert Haigh is an amateur English poet, Musician and photographer. more…

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