Taking My Time



I'm taking my time with chores still to do;
I don't like to rush them at all.
I'm painting the kitchen a delicate hue,
And driving my wife up the wall!

She says that it should be finished by now.
I tell her you can't rush these things.
She looks unimpressed, with deep furrowed brow,
While outside a nightingale sings.

She says, "That reminds me, the garden's a mess!
I thought you were sorting that out!"
I say, "I'll do that tomorrow, I guess.
There's no need for you to shout!"

She'll be her old self in a few days' time;
These chores will be finished by then.
Meanwhile, here I am at the scene of my crime,
With the sun going down once again!

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Copyright © Robert Haigh 2017
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on September 10, 2020

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Scheme ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH X
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 712
Words 135
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

Robert Haigh

Robert Haigh is an amateur English poet, Musician and photographer. more…

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  • Adroity
    Your humorous poem captures the relatable scenario of taking one's time with chores amidst the chaos of daily life. The playful banter between you and your wife, as you leisurely paint the kitchen and delay tending to the garden, adds a lighthearted touch to the narrative. The contrast between your relaxed approach to chores and your wife's more urgent perspective creates a comedic dynamic in the poem. The imagery of the nightingale singing outside as you navigate through the tasks at hand paints a scene of domestic life filled with both responsibilities and moments of levity. Your poem skillfully weaves together the mundanity of household tasks with the humor found in the interactions between partners, showcasing the everyday humor and warmth that can be found in shared experiences. Have you found that infusing humor into your poetry allows you to explore everyday moments with a touch of light-heartedness and relatability? 
    LikeReply4 months ago
  • Dianejean57
    Beautiful poem I love it.
    LikeReply10 months ago

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