Analysis of Life Keeps Trying to Knock Me Down



Life keeps trying to knock me down,
With problems thrown my way.
It makes me wear a fitful frown,
As blue skies turn to grey.

I've taken knocks all through the years,
But still I battle on.
Pleasures often plagued with fears
Are what I feed upon.

Tarnished dreams still have their place
In this imperfect world.
A smile can still caress my face
When triumph is unfurled.

Two steps forward, one step back,
Is how it often goes.
I compensate for what I lack
By keeping on my toes!

Life keeps trying to knock me down,
And sometimes it succeeds.
But I can take and break that frown
By tempering  my needs!

Copyright © Robert Haigh 2017


Scheme Abab cdcd efef ghgh Aiai b
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 110111 11110101 111111 11011101 111101 1010111 111101 1011111 010101 01110111 110101 1110111 111101 1101111 110111 11101111 001101 11110111 110011 10101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 622
Words 119
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 83
Words per stanza (avg) 20
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Submitted by RobertHaigh on June 11, 2020

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Robert Haigh

Robert Haigh is an amateur English poet, Musician and photographer. more…

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