Analysis of Sometimes



Sometimes you see the colour of my eyes
sometimes you kiss the shadow on my cheeks
and sometimes you admire my lips without the lipstick
It's sometimes you feel my depth and soul
But too many times my eyes change the colour
and they become two big storms of clouds
and cheeks became a playground in the desert
My fingers long for touching your skin
My palms are empty plates they will
fall apart into thousand tiny minds
Why this sometimes  is only sometimes


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 448
Words 84
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 11
Lines Amount 11
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 373
Words per stanza (avg) 85
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Submitted by sonja_v on June 28, 2019

Modified on March 05, 2023

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sonja votolen

... poetry and prose writer, Slovenia, published eight books of poetry , a few drama texts and two prose works; also writing for different newspapers and magazines, she runs literary meetings, received awards for poetry in Italy , even the first international prize for poetry in Rome 2001. My poems in Italian were translated by Jolka Milič, a great Slovenian translator. 2019: two poetry books were published- Tudi brez peruti sem ptica ( in Slovenia) and Quando l'erba è giovane / Ko je trava mlada, 2019 ( in Italy, bilingual) more…

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