Analysis of Shelter Me In II



today I exist as a vapor then I am no more
some may equate logic for fear that brings nothing near
my chest is heavy and my pulse is setting in
yesterday was such an easy game we used to play
awe but then let's face it it's quite easier today
for I am not myself these day for all i know I might by two
there's room enough in store to view yet I'm in a bind
I'm likewise in a haze for who I am from scene to scene
yet luck's provision is preverse it seems to work more in reverse
if things are better they'll be worse in quite a while
hey penny, one penny, tri penny, three
nature seldom ever fails to most surprisingly provide an undisclosing posing side
at one's dismay one needs to pray

Shelter me in a newer way to begin
won't you help me my friend
through mountains of madness amidst all its sadness
we can dig deeper then ever before
lest I implore another opened door
getting caught up in the middle playing a game of second fiddle
most of life seems to be a riddle
Shelter me in through the storms of life
amidst each added spice as if were on a roller coaster
don't stop me now but I may need a lawyer
as we get a little older we can grow to succumb to the world's cloister
like a hen with a rooster gets your pets spayed and nuetered.
we are only here for a short time so sound the alarm

inside we hide behind four walls that seal
caught up in a fix in every hope as you hold your crucifix
there's danger up ahead yet we lie in bed in the walking dead
a face full of lead falling apart at the seams in the evil schemes
shelter me in so I can breath always got something up my sleeve
shadows block the vortex of the sun lit resolution
we are out searching for the latest solution
in barbed wire fences always second glances
we often will scamble as Felix was played by Tony Randall
its hard to handle living in a society that's blind you see
but as a poet friend I'm making sweet lasting memories
languished over the onslaught of feelings inside
your the tool of the government and industry to
its all a will for power nothing more lest I simply implore
the fate for so much more yet for what?

shelter me in out in the playing field of delegation as polticians embrace a resonable solution
in the newspaper as shelter lies dormant in its beckoning call
to the know it all out in his ivory tower its in the hour of power
bask in the vast expanse between space and time
John Lennon said it best, "Happiness is a lone gun momma bang bang shoot shoot".
we got thick headed polticians that can't even reason
suicide is on the rise people are running away to hide
abortion on demand when will we ever live to understand
no one has a voice anymore no one understands
until today we got every good reason to bow our heads to pray
a mass hysteria in our land as we text our way through the day
no one breaks bread anymore no one bothers to pray
yet it ought not be this way on some sorted time delay
you still make fun of the gay instead of embracing them as they are our family
lines being drawn in the sand when will we ever live to understand

Shelter me in my friend with whom I can depend people are making choices
there maybe something blowing in the wind for Dylan was right on that one
building bridges that go across party lines in their most unique affliation
philosophically filled up with sullen brevity and everything that does the heavy deed
we often will hide behind the false hidden garb of compromise taking heed to twisted lies
Shelter me in so that I may live it all over once again my dearly beloved friend may you understand.


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Poetic Form
Metre 01101101011111 1101101111101 111100111100 101111011111 1111111110001 111111111111111 1101011111001 1100111111111 110101111111001 111101110101 1101101101 10101011101000111101 11011111 10100101101 111111 110110011110 1111011001 1101010101 10110010100111010 111111010 101010111 011101110101010 11111111010 1110101011110110110 1011010111101 11101101111001 0111011111 1100101001111110 1101011110100101 01111100110100101 101011111110111 110101011010 111101010010 01101011010 110111101111010 11110100001001111 110101110110100 10100111001 1011010001001 1101110101111001 011111111 10101001011010110101010 0010110110011001 101111011001010010110 10010101101 1101111001011101111 111101111010 101101101100111 010101111101101 11101011101 0101111001101110111 0101000101111101101 111101111011 11111111110101 1111101011010111110100 1101001111101101 1010111111011011010 110101000111011111 10101101101011011 0100011110100010110101 1101101011011101011101 10101111111101011100111101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 3,572
Words 707
Sentences 4
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 13, 13, 15, 15, 6
Lines Amount 62
Letters per line (avg) 47
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 577
Words per stanza (avg) 138
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Submitted by hitalot on November 09, 2017

Modified on March 05, 2023

3:32 min read
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Mario William Vitale

Mario William Vitale is a twentieth century poet. He has developed a style of free verse. Has written over one thousand poems. more…

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