Analysis of Gimme that moon to play with



`Gimme that moon to play with, Ma! Gimme those stars!
Gimme those clusters and stuff them all in my pocket!’

He flushes, he cries, he stares at the moon
Jasoda wipes his tears, ‘Don’t be so crazy, Kanha!
The moon is far up in the sky! There are kids in every house,
You alone don’t seem to have any sense!’
`Gimme that moon to play with, Ma! Gimme those stars!
Gimme those clusters and stuff them all in my pocket!’

Taking water in a bowl, she showed him the moon
And consoled Narsaiyya’s Lord!
`Gimme that moon to play with, Ma! Gimme those stars!
Gimme those clusters and stuff them all in my pocket!’


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Poetic Form
Metre 101111111011 1011001110110 1101111101 1111111101 0111100111101001 1011111101 101111111011 1011001110110 101000111101 00111 101111111011 1011001110110
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 618
Words 120
Sentences 14
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 6, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 38
Words per line (avg) 10
Letters per stanza (avg) 153
Words per stanza (avg) 38
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on March 14, 2023

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Narsinh Mehta

Narsinh Mehta, also known as Narsi Mehta or Narsi Bhagat , was a 15th-century poet-saint of Gujarat, India, notable as a bhakta, an exponent of Vaishnava poetry. He is especially revered in Gujarati literature, where he is acclaimed as its Adi Kavi (Sanskrit for "first among poets"). His bhajan Vaishnav Jan To was Mahatma Gandhi's favourite and has become synonymous with him.  more…

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