Analysis of Hokku Poems in Four Seasons

Yosa Buson 1716 (Settsu Province) – 1783



The year's first poem done,
with smug self confidence
a haikai poet.

Longer has become the daytime;
a pheasant is fluttering
down onto the bridge.

Yearning for the Bygones

Lengthening days,
accumulating, and recalling
the days of distant past.

Slowly passing days,
with an echo heard here in a
corner of Kyoto.

The white elbow
of a priest, dozing,
in the dusk of spring.

Into a nobleman,
a fox has changed himself
early evening of spring.

The light on a candle stand
is transferred to another candle
spring twilight.

A short nap,
then awakening
this spring day has darkened.

Who is it for,
this pillow on the floor,
in the twilight of spring?

The big gateway's heavy doors,
standing in the dusk of spring.

Hazy moonlight --
someone is standing
among the pear trees.

Blossoms on the pear tree,
lighten by the moonlight, and there
a woman is reading a letter.

Springtime rain -- almost dark,
and yet today still lingers.

Springtime rain --
a little shell on a small beach,
enough to moisten it.

Springtime rain is falling,
as a child's rag ball is soaking
wet on the house roof.

Within the quietness
of a lull in visitors' absence,
appears the peony flower!

Peony having scattered, two
or three petals lie on one another.

The rain of May --
facing toward the big river, houses,
just two of them.

At a Place Called Kaya in Tanba

A summer river being crossed,
how pleasing,
with sandals in my hands!

The mountain stonecutter's chisel;
being cooled in the clear water.

Grasses wet in the rain,
just after the festival cart passed by.

To my eyes how delightful
the fan of my beloved is,
in complete white.

A flying cuckoo,
over the Heian capital,
goes diagonally across the city.

Evening breeze --
water is slapping against
the legs of a blue heron.

An old well --
jumping at a mosquito,
the fish's sound is dark.

Young bamboo trees --
at Hashimoto, the courtesan,
is she still there or not?

After having been fallen,
its image still stands --
the peony flower.

Stepping on the Eastern Slope

Wild roses in bloom --
so like a pathway in,
or toward, my home village.

With sorrow while coming upon the hill
--flowering wild roses.

Summer night ending so soon,
with on the river shallows still remains
the moon in a sliver.

It penetrates into me;
stepping on the comb of my gone wife,
in the bedroom.

More than last year,
I now feel solitude;
this autumn twilight.

This being alone may even be a kind of happy
-- in the autumn dusk.

Moon in the sky's top,
clearly passes through this
poor town street.

This feeling of sadness --
a fishing string being blown by the autumn wind.

Let myself go to bed;
New Year's Day is only a matter
for tomorrow.

Camphor tree roots are quietly getting wet,
in the winter rainy air.

A handsaw is sounding,
as if from a poor one,
at midnight in this winter.

Old man's love affair;
in trying to forget it,
a winter rainfall.

In an old pond,
a straw sandal is sinking
-- it is sleeting.  


Scheme ABX XCX X DCX DXE ECC AXC XFG XCX HHC XC GCI JKL MX NXO CCX PBL QL XXX R XCS FL NR FTG QFJ IXA XEM IAX ASL X UXX XT XXL JXU XXG JX XXX PX XLE XK CAL KOX XCC
Poetic Form
Metre 011101 111100 0110 1010101 0101100 11001 10101 1001 01000010 011101 10101 11101100 10110 011 10110 00111 010100 011101 101011 0110101 101101010 11 011 10100 111110 1111 110101 00111 011101 1000111 101 1110 01011 101011 1010101 010110010 1111 0101110 11 01011011 011101 11110 10111110 11011 010100 101010010 01010010 10010101 1110111010 0111 1001011010 1111 10111001 01010101 110 110011 010110 10100110 101001 1100100111 1111010 0111011 0011 0101 1001100 10100001010 101 1011001 0110110 111 1010010 010111 1011 1001001 111111 1010110 11011 010010 1010101 11001 11010 1011110 1101100101 100110 1011011 110101101 010010 110011 101011111 001 1111 11110 1101 11001110101110 00101 10011 101011 111 110110 010110110101 11111 111110010 101 1111100101 0010101 01110 111011 110110 11101 0101011 0101 0111 0110110 111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 2,904
Words 535
Sentences 41
Stanzas 43
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 1, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 1, 3, 2, 2, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 1, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 2, 3, 2, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 114
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 52
Words per stanza (avg) 12
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 11, 2023

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