Analysis of The Artilleryman's Vision

Walt Whitman 1819 (West Hills) – 1892 (Camden)




   WHILE my wife at my side lies slumbering, and the wars are over long,
   And my head on the pillow rests at home, and the vacant midnight
         passes,
   And through the stillness, through the dark, I hear, just hear, the
         breath of my infant,
   There in the room, as I wake from sleep, this vision presses upon me:
   The engagement opens there and then, in fantasy unreal;
   The skirmishers begin--they crawl cautiously ahead--I hear the
         irregular snap! snap!
   I hear the sounds of the different missiles--the short t-h-t! t-h-t!
         of the rifle balls;
   I see the shells exploding, leaving small white clouds--I hear the
         great shells shrieking as they pass;
   The grape, like the hum and whirr of wind through the trees, (quick,
         tumultuous, now the contest rages!)
   All the scenes at the batteries themselves rise in detail before me
         again;                                                       10
   The crashing and smoking--the pride of the men in their pieces;
   The chief gunner ranges and sights his piece, and selects a fuse of
         the right time;
   After firing, I see him lean aside, and look eagerly off to note the
         effect;
   --Elsewhere I hear the cry of a regiment charging--(the young colonel
         leads himself this time, with brandish'd sword;)
   I see the gaps cut by the enemy's volleys, (quickly fill'd up, no
         delay;)
   I breathe the suffocating smoke--then the flat clouds hover low,
         concealing all;
   Now a strange lull comes for a few seconds, not a shot fired on
         either side;
   Then resumed, the chaos louder than ever, with eager calls, and
         orders of officers;
   While from some distant part of the field the wind wafts to my ears a
         shout of applause, (some special success;)
   And ever the sound of the cannon, far or near, (rousing, even in
         dreams, a devilish exultation, and all the old mad joy, in the
         depths of my soul;)                                          20
   And ever the hastening of infantry shifting positions--batteries,
         cavalry, moving hither and thither;
   (The falling, dying, I heed not--the wounded, dripping and red, I
         heed not--some to the rear are hobbling;)
   Grime, heat, rush--aid-de-camps galloping by, or on a full run;
   With the patter of small arms, the warning s-s-t of the rifles,
         (these in my vision I hear or see,)
   And bombs busting in air, and at night the vari-color'd rockets.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,495
Words 390
Sentences 7
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 45
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,678
Words per stanza (avg) 476
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 14, 2023

1:58 min read
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Walt Whitman

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