Analysis of Like This
If anyone asks you
how the perfect satisfaction
of all our sexual wanting
will look, lift your face
and say,
When someone mentions the gracefulness
of the nightsky, climb up on the roof
and dance and say,
If anyone wants to know what 'spirit' is,
or what 'God’s fragrance' means,
lean your head toward him or her.
Keep your face there close.
When someone quotes the old poetic image
about clouds gradually uncovering the moon,
slowly loosen knot by knot the strings
of your robe.
If anyone wonders how Jesus raised the dead,
don’t try to explain the miracle.
Kiss me on the lips.
Like this. Like this.
When someone asks what it means
to 'die for love,' point
here.
If someone asks how tall I am, frown
and measure with your fingers the space
between the creases on your forehead.
The soul sometimes leaves the body, the returns.
When someone doesn’t believe that,
walk back into my house.
When lovers moan,
they’re telling our story.
I am a sky where spirits live.
Stare into this deepening blue,
while the breeze says a secret.
When someone asks what there is to do,
light the candle in his hand.
How did Joseph’s scent come to Jacob?
How did Jacob’s sight return?
A little wind cleans the eyes.
When Shams comes back from Tabriz,
he’ll put just his head around the edge
of the door to surprise us
Scheme | AXXBC BXC XDXX XXXX EXX X DXX XBE XXX XX XAX AX X X X BXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11011 1001010 111010010 11111 01 111001 10111101 0101 1101111101 111101 11101110 11111 1110101010 0111000010001 101011101 111 11010110101 111010100 11101 1111 111111 11111 1 11111111 010111001 010101110 01011010001 111011 110111 1101 1101010 11011101 10111001 1011010 11111111 1010011 111011110 1110101 0101101 111111 111110101 1011011 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,402 |
Words | 263 |
Sentences | 32 |
Stanzas | 16 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 3, 4, 4, 3, 1, 3, 3, 3, 2, 3, 2, 1, 1, 1, 3 |
Lines Amount | 42 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 64 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 15 |
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Submitted on May 13, 2011
Modified on May 01, 2023
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