Analysis of A world of fake love!



I hear this word!
 This four letter word!
Yet when you really mean it!
 It's felt and not heard!
I may like you!
 I may even love you with the love of God!
Yet, I will not lie, I do not love those, who pray for my demise!
 Phony and fake!
The words that are thrown!
 I will not lie like the snake!
The love I gave was shown!
 The whispers and shadows!
The plots and schemes!
 A world in all terror
With some begging please!
 I could not be perfect!
My Lord, forgive me!
 Only you , became sacred, when they tried to kill me!
What is a sinner?
 Except not a man!
What is a saint?
 You are all I had!
So I could not leave it, alone to just rot!
 Why do they hate Isreal, when they have their own spot?
What was the purpose to die for those in need, when there the same ones who cursed you?
 Sounds like love to me!
Yet, still some will not see heaven!
 I shall not sit with a snake!
What is love!
 If not an action indeed!


Scheme AABACDEFGFGHIJKLMMJNOPQQCMRFST
Poetic Form Tetractys  (23%)
Etheree  (23%)
Metre 1111 11101 1111011 11011 1111 11101110111 1111111111111101 1001 01111 1111101 011111 01001 0101 010110 11101 111101 11011 1010110111111 11010 01101 1101 11111 11111101111 11111111111 1101011110111011111 11111 11111110 1111101 111 1111001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 920
Words 216
Sentences 29
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 30
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 677
Words per stanza (avg) 189

About this poem

A short poem reminding us to seperate true love from the benefits of loyalty!

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Written on May 12, 2024

Submitted by devonb.14033 on May 12, 2024

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Devon Bates

I was born in Norfolk Virginia! Then I moved to Fayetteville North Carolina were I was raised and I reside today! I have kids and I am divorced! I am 41 I was born on July 18 1980! I love being a cancer I love who I am and God! more…

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