Analysis of Without Melting In Your Hands (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Without Melting In Your Hands   (Bussokusekika)

I’ll spit in your mouth
If you’ll return the favor
Oh sweet saliva
There is something intimate
Like when I’d melt in your mouth
Without melting in your hands

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   5/11/2024


Scheme X AXXXAX X
Poetic Form
Metre 01100111 11011 1101010 11010 1110100 1111011 0110011 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 254
Words 42
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 64
Words per stanza (avg) 16

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Written on May 11, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on May 11, 2024

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