Analysis of The Finish line

Shasha jean 2010 (Florida)



I can never get it right,
no matter how hard I try
always feeling like time has,
no rhyme or reason why.

Always feeling so lonely,
With sprinkling thoughts of maybes
This vivid dream of mine,
Might never make it to the finish line.

Nothing’s ever set in stone,
My mind could still be blown
I could still be given a chance to make it right,
A chance to shine.

All I need is more time,
I could still make it to the finish line.


Scheme ABCB XCDD EEAD XD
Poetic Form
Metre 1110111 1101111 110111 111101 110110 110111 110111 1101110101 1010101 111111 111110011111 0111 111111 1111110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 430
Words 98
Sentences 4
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 82
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on May 10, 2024

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