Analysis of Dear Spider, Cage and Others.



I write this in a submissive rage,
to the ones who don't have the vocabulary to read this,
the disgusting grime that sticks onto the fingers of innocent people, you two, and others.

DEAR CAGE,
YOU ARE FILTH. You necked and crushed me, locked me in your bird cage, and SHOOK me, SHOOK me, SHOOK me, you rolled me up and burnt me like the stains on your shag carpet.
YOU SHALL NEVER, TOUCH ME AGAIN.

DEAR SPIDER,
YOU WHO HAD WARNED ME. You told me you were horrible, evil all the likeness, right before you'd hold me and beg me to make the monsters go away. You told me to crawl out of the web while I could. I stuck by your side and you ate me anyway.
YOU SHALL NEVER, HAVE ME WAITING AGAIN.

Dear Mystery Man (2014)
Monster is a kind word for you, I wish I wasn't eight years old.

YOU SHALL NEVER, BE AROUND A CHILD AGAIN.

YOU,
you,
you shall never be vulnerable again,
you will be loved again.


Scheme axx axb xxb xx b CCbb
Poetic Form
Metre 111000101 10111100100111 00101111001011001011010 11 111110111101110111111111101110111110 11101101 110 11111111101001010101011110111101010111111110111111111011110 1110111001 11001 1010111111110111 11101010101 1 1 11101100001 111101
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 901
Words 194
Sentences 12
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 2, 1, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 43
Words per line (avg) 11
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 29

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i need to throw it all away one last time

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Submitted by MigiRenoir on May 10, 2024

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